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„Message in a bottle (Emotional rescue)“ of Bernhard Pappe

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I Bebe (irene.beddiesgmx.de)

26.11.2014
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Dear Bernhard,

truely that is a strong poem on loneliness: sending out a message to the beloved, to life, in vain.
I only hope it's not your situation at the moment.

Kindest regards with an encouraging smile
Irene


Answer by Bernhard Pappe (26.11.2014):
Dear Irene, don’t worry about my mood. I’m feeling fine and free. Free enough to write such a strong poem on loneliness. Have a good time without any bad messages in bottles or somewhere else. Kind greetings Bernhard

MarleneR (HRR2411AOL.com)

26.11.2014
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Lieber Bernhard,
fülle diese Flasche mit allem, was dich
bedrückt, auch mit deinen Tränen und
Hoffnungen. Vielleicht kommt sie zu dir
zurück und bringt eine Nachricht mit, die
dein Herz erfreut.

Liebe Grüße zu dir von Marlene

Answer by Bernhard Pappe (26.11.2014):
Liebe Marlene, würde ich die Flasche mit all den unangenehmen Dingen füllen, so mag ich sie nicht zurück. Sie soll bleiben auf dem Grund des Ozeans. Dein Kommentar aber ist eine Nachricht, die mein Herz erfreut, ganz ohne Flaschenpost. Liebe Grüße am Abend Bernhard

Ellaberta (Ellabertagmx.de)

26.11.2014
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Dear Bernhard,

against all odds there is a chance
that someone sees with just a glance
a shimm'ring bottle in the sun
just opens it and thinks what fun
the sender is a kindred spirit
I'll try to find him without limit
the message never was in vain
it cleared the heart it eased the pain!
Hugs
Christina


Answer by Bernhard Pappe (27.11.2014):
Dear Christina, I’m very proud of being the inspiration of your words. Thank you for the rhymes. It’s nice to read it. Have a nice evening and kind regards Bernhard

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