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„My Essence.“ of Jasmine Shaw

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timdee (tim.martin54321yahoo.es)

27.09.2011
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I guess thats a segment from a longer work. The change from the chase to the descripton of the region worked because of the theme, essence. I liked it. In the beginning it struck me that if you are running for your life you wouldn't get a flashback because youre too concerned for the now.

Answer by Jasmine Shaw (27.09.2011):
Actually no this is the only piece. It was a part of exam work. I had a picture and I had to write and essay based on a picture. I wrote and I was very pround of it so i put it online. Thanks for your comment.

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