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„El artesano de Dios“ of Héctor de Souza

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Flor de Lis (mariasanchezblancgmail.com) Authors profile04/03/2014Answer
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Muy bueno el relato! Explicas muy bien, pero le falta algo. Intenta poner algo que choque, porque todo ocurre con mucha tranquilidad. De todas formas, es muy muy bonito.

Answer by Héctor de Souza:
Agradezco tu comentario. Consideraré tu sugerencia. No me resultará fácil, debo confesarlo. Mi escritura, como bien dices, es "tranquila"; peor, diría que es cansina. Gracias, de nuevo. Saludos, Héctor de Souza. (04/18/2014)




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