Jürgen Skupniewski-Fernandez

Dialogue with the Soul

Dialogue with the Soul

The brilliant white catamaran anchored a little more than two hours in the small secluded bay of Formentera. In the distance,
weighed by the uniform wave, dreaming three medium-sized yachts quietly into the cozy mild pre-sunset.
The early summer tones of the evening sun lay like a silky orange blanket over the sea.
In the rhythm of gentle breaths spilled the water playfully over the yellow, fine-grained sandy beach.
Shadows, around silly walking girls announced the early sunset.
Deeply absorbed, thinking of nothing and wholly captured by the light of the mood,
something suddenly stirred up in my mind.
It was as if I heard a voice; As if someone wanted to enter into a dialogue with me:
“I weigh myself on the waves of earthly life; I'm so close to you now.
Mood picture, Orange breathed, your gaze looks playful waves, majestic silhouettes,
hills of the neighboring island, united, immersed in pastel light, the mountains of Ibiza,
rugged crowns, facing the sea, led by the rock "Sa Galera", which seems to be connected to the legend of Atlantis.
This is the moment, the moment, he does not come very often, but now is the time.
Open up and let me fly “, spoke the soul.
Within one time everything was so quiet around me; felt detached, weightless flying over beckoning waves,
pandered with the last strength of sun rays to win the favor of peace.
Put me on the soft white feather dress of a seagull and shouted cheerfully like a child.
I shot up in arrow flight to the endless open evening sky and saw the whole world turning.
The creaking of the anchor chain woke me up, took me back. I saw myself dazed.
A gentle breeze touched my face. It was a moment of absolute happiness.
In the Chamber of my heart I felt a pleasant freshness.
I understood; my soul needed output, freedom, sometimes out of my always only " I",
on refreshed strength to face the next adventures of life.
I rewarded myself with a glass of white wine and happily followed that seagull
who did not take it for another two hours to accompany us.

 

 

 

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In den Gedichten hat der Autor das lyrische "Ich" durch ein vorwiegendes lyrisches "Du" bzw. "Wir" ersetzt, was eine kollektive Nähe zum Geschehenen hervorruft.
Die sehr eindrücklichen Beschreibungen leben von den vielen Metaphern und Vergleichen.
Eine klare und leicht verständliche Sprache sowie wohlgeformte Reime ermöglichen dem Leser einen guten Zugang zu den Gedichten.
Etwas für Lyrik-Liebhaber und jene, die gerne über das Leben philosophieren. Eine kleine poetische Reise, die den Leser zum Verweilen und zum Nachdenken über den Sinn des Lebens einlädt.

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