08/15/2016
Category "Humour" (Poems in english)
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Gerd Farber

Disappointment

Disappointment

A lady from downtown Khartum 
for having a climax at noon
encouraged her man
to show what he can. 
He came, but it happened too soon.

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So he/it/ turned out to be no boon??
And the lady retired with a swoon???
swooning, but smiling ... Inge

Alma Brosci08/15/2016

Ein Klimax - schon mittags - macht Müh',
weil mittags ist echt doch noch früh.
Vielleicht ist zu habend
er vollends am Abend,
wenn man(n) spät heimkommt - aber wie! :-))

Liebe Grüße
Faro

hansl08/16/2016

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