Andre M. Pietroschek
Undying Hate - Unfinished Free Verse Poem
Undying Hate (e-stories.de edition, 2023)
© Andre M. Pietroschek, all rights reserved
Spontaneously written for my poetizer dot com portfolio, this freestyle poem failed. It isn't really doublets or couplets either. The problem was: I lost the writing flow, and simply had no better ideas. On the good side: I can delete, or improve, it later. ;-)
Hate: Condemned, feared, ridiculed, or outcast,
Undying hate still is a factual power in each life.
Few of us find faith, mindset, and fortitude, as;
Our bodies will fail us, yet timeless hate won't.
We can worship denial, due to science, whatever,
Yet hate has more power, and can be more clever.
I remember the women's catalog of demands made,
Each convinced they offer better than undying hate.
Still, if I share the real truth of my not-so-easy life,
Hate was more reliable & more useful than a wife!
Some call it a dark path, freak out, or commit crime,
I call it a tricky choice, as hate left us `learning time´.
Life needs discipline, timing, and wisdom for good,
Media only show the failures, who never understood.
Maturity can make us realize in life, or much too late:
That hate needs an `us´ living up to our chosen fate!
Easy, reckless, and irresponsible aren't adult enough?
Nope, undying hate isn't about a selfish coward in love!
Hence, even when worried about my mortal way to end;
Undying hate made no demands, for it came as a friend!
The ones, who scapegoat hate are in truth the ones, who messed-it-up and do not even try better. Righteous
fury happens just as often, as diabolical rage or what modern people call hate-crimes. Call, as few ever
delivered us any evidence at all.Authors comment
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Published on e-Stories.org on 03/01/2023.